*Sample *Intro to story

So.. Yeah. I wrote the intro to a story about this MMORPG I play. Enjoy...? Haha.

~Intro~

As the Sun's bright rays graced the bright beautiful sea, the Captain peered through his telescope on the deck of the Isya. He didn't see much to begin with; it was all ocean in every direction. However, one of the men assigned to the crow's nest declared "Land ho!", and pointed due southwest. All heads on board turned and saw what looked to be a tiny speck in the distance. The Captain rushed up to the wheel, and with the skill of a noble sailor, he turned the Frigate around. As they got closer to the island, they saw that it was uninhabited, for there were no docks of any kind to be seen. The Captain dispatched several sloops to go ashore, and he himself took his own. As they reached land, they scurried out of their boats to see what they had discovered. It was a beach, with white sand and trees as far as the eye could see. Pleased, the Captain declared this land founded, and decided to name it after his vessel, "Isya". The Co-Captain, Elderine, came up to the Captain and slung his arm around his shoulder and said, "Roumen, you really have outdone yourself." Grinning, Roumen turned to Elderine and simply replied, "Yeah." The two of them made their way back to the Frigate and prepared for however long it would take to create a society out of this wilderness. As the boats drifted back to the Frigate, Uruga watched them from the shade of a tree. She had never seen such strange creatures; they were fair skinned, and walked like she did. Yet, she was the only being she knew of that walked on two legs and formed words. She became fascinated with them, and yet terrified all at the same time. Slowly, Uruga shuffled back to her cave, and wondered what this all meant.